My Music magazine is called Soul as the magazine is based on all types of rock i.e. Alternative, Indie rock etc. The slogan also goes with the name as it claims it is "the soul of rock".
A lot to be done yet Oliver Front Cover - I like the mast head. Put it on a white banner, make the tagline smaller. Image needs to be retaken. Red eye looks bad. Get your models to be standing side on or looking at you over their shoulders, rather than standing face onto you. It's boring. Go outside, the light is better. Or use the lights. Remember all the photo taking tips you had. They are also on the VLE. Font choice is crucial. Arial is best.
Contents Ask yourself, are you taking pictures for a magazine to make the audience want to read it? These pictures are out of focus, of the back of someone's head, not cropped in tight enough. The columns need to be the same width. that includes the size of the photos.
You need to be much more focused on creating a professional looking package Oliver. There is much improvement to be made I'm sure.
A lot to be done yet Oliver
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I like the mast head. Put it on a white banner, make the tagline smaller.
Image needs to be retaken. Red eye looks bad. Get your models to be standing side on or looking at you over their shoulders, rather than standing face onto you. It's boring. Go outside, the light is better. Or use the lights. Remember all the photo taking tips you had. They are also on the VLE.
Font choice is crucial. Arial is best.
Contents
Ask yourself, are you taking pictures for a magazine to make the audience want to read it? These pictures are out of focus, of the back of someone's head, not cropped in tight enough.
The columns need to be the same width. that includes the size of the photos.
You need to be much more focused on creating a professional looking package Oliver. There is much improvement to be made I'm sure.